Tuesday 2 October 2012

Take a look at our poems!

Year 2 have been working SO hard on their 'Twinkle Twinkle' poems. They have been trying to follow the pattern carefully.

Take a look at our verses all about rockets! Have a go at singing them yourself.

20 comments:

  1. counting down before we fly
    Blasting of into the sky
    Lot`s o.f smoke is coming out
    Twurling swurling about
    Counting down before we fly
    Blasting of into the sky.

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    1. well done that was a wonderful poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  2. Arisha and zakariye2 October 2012 at 06:24

    Rumbling Rumbling red orange fire
    Zooming Zooming getting higher
    They count down from 10 to nought
    Lucky Lucky astnought
    Rumbling Rumbling red orange fire
    Zooming Zooming getting higher

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  3. Liliana and rhiannon.2 October 2012 at 06:29

    Rumbling rumbling rumbling ship.
    You are making a big trip.
    They are discvering stars.
    Rumbling rumbling rumbling ship.
    You are making a big trip.

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    1. Rhiannon and Liliana-

      I think you have missed out a line? Can you reply and tell me what the missing line is? It needs to rhyme with 'stars'.

      Miss Lomax : )

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  4. Daniel and Shianne2 October 2012 at 06:29

    Zooming zooming up to space,
    This is a wonderful place.
    Stars brightly shine everywhere,
    Twinkling like a fun fair.
    zooming zooming up to space,
    This is a wonderful place.


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    1. Great ryhming word I love your poem!!!

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  5. Shining shining red and bright
    Rockets zooming out of sight
    Pitch black space is very fun
    Are we going to the sun?
    Shining shining red and bright
    Rocket zooming out of sight

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    1. Amazing poem a love the words you used you guy are great poets.

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  6. Grumbling rumbling red spaceship
    You are going on a trip.
    Feeling very very proud
    People waving in the crowd.
    Grumbling rumbling red spaceship.
    You are going on a trip feeling very very proud People waving in the crowd.

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  7. kenya georgia Jahnae2 October 2012 at 06:34

    Flying flying though the sky.
    Do you like flying high?
    Zooming up and making clouds
    Making such a rumbling sound.
    Flying flying though the sky.
    Do you flying high?

    By kenya georgia Jahnae

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  8. Harsh and Faizaan2 October 2012 at 06:34

    Counting down from 10 to 1
    Having fun towards the sun.
    Cloudy rocket fling high
    You'll have in the black sky.
    Counting down from 10 to 1
    Having fun towards the sun.

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  9. Shooting shooting red space ship
    You are on an exciting trip

    You will hop upon the moon
    Come back home, very soon.

    Shooting shooting red space ship
    You are on an exciting trip

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  10. Nathan and Joshua2 October 2012 at 06:38

    Twirling swirling round and round
    Rockets make loud grumbling sounds
    Making clouds that are very big
    Getting spades out ready to dig
    Twirling swirling round and round
    Rockets make loud grumbling sounds.

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  11. Shooting shooting white space ship
    Going on a special trip.
    Zooming zooming very high.
    Goodbye rocket off you fly.
    Shooting shooting white space ship
    Going on a special trip.



    Going on a special
    Zooming zooming round the
    cloudy rockit off you fly

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    1. WOW! I Love your poem! I can see you've both worked extremely hard to make your words rhyme. Well done Zahra, Shay and all of year 2.

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  12. Sabirin and Sofia2 October 2012 at 06:56

    Smokey smokey big hot ship,
    They are going on an exciting trip.
    They are counting down from 10,
    Astronauts are flying men.
    Smokey smokey big hot ship,
    They are going on an exciting trip.

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  13. Hello Year 2
    I am a digital leader from 5W. I love your poems they rhyme very well and they are very like twinkle twinkle little star

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  14. I think the line I missed out is.. The big red planet mars.

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